The Revision Questions I Ask That Change Everything

Let's unlock what's stuck.

After years of working with writers on their manuscripts, their creative spirit reflecting equal parts hope and exhaustion, I've come to recognize that moment. You know the one. When you've been too close to your story for so long that you can't see it clearly anymore.

I see you there, having reworked those first three chapters for the twentieth time. I understand the weight of carrying a full manuscript that you're not sure even hangs together anymore. I feel your frustration when conflicting advice has left you paralyzed, uncertain which direction to take.

And I want you to know something important: this is all part of the journey. Nearly every writer I've worked with has stood exactly where you're standing now.

Here’s the truth: Sometimes, the right question can unlock everything that's been stuck. It can reconnect you with your story's heartbeat and clear away the fog of doubt.

The Questions That Cut Through the Noise

I ask writers the same simple yet powerful questions that consistently create breakthrough moments. These questions don't just help writers get unstuck, they reignite passion and provide clear direction for revision.

Let’s break these down…